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Friday, 1 September 2017

Moon light


As Jack lumbered across the icy ground it was a very cold night.So Jack stred at one spot nearest to a mountain in the snow boom bang a massive meteor came dashing at hem. Suddenly a huge moon came down from the sky no no! Said Jack there are aliens trying to kill  Jack. Jack said to himself as the aliens gandanup on Jack “god help me” said Jack.will he ever kill the aliens.

3 comments:

  1. good job Morgan i love the cliffhanger at the end i hope you some more writing like this

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    1. sorry Morgan i mean can you do some more writing like this

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    2. thanks Samuel I well do it one day

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