I am a Year 4 student from Aotearoa New Zealand. What I share may not be perfect. Please leave positive comments that let me know what I have done well and what I could do to improve next time.
Tuesday, 5 September 2017
Friday, 1 September 2017
The walking dead
As we walked into the bone-chilling forest, they could see hundreds of tall gum trees surrounding a haunted house. Suddenly there was a zombie coming out of the house and then ten more appeared. “What was that?” asked Bob
“Zombies! Run for your life!” said Mark. Bob stood still with his heart beating a look of terror . Will they survive?
“Zombies! Run for your life!” said Mark. Bob stood still with his heart beating a look of terror . Will they survive?
Moon light
As Jack lumbered across the icy ground it was a very cold night.So Jack stred at one spot nearest to a mountain in the snow boom bang a massive meteor came dashing at hem. Suddenly a huge moon came down from the sky no no! Said Jack there are aliens trying to kill Jack. Jack said to himself as the aliens gandanup on Jack “god help me” said Jack.will he ever kill the aliens.
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